The voice of OTC is friendly, optimistic, helpful and straightforward. Our words are simple, concise and conversational. When communicating with students, employees, stakeholders and the general public, less is often more. Here are a few tips to help you write in OTC’s voice.
BE CLEAR
Always write in active voice.
Example:
Instead of, “Scholarship applications should be submitted online.”
Try, “Submit your scholarship applications online.”
BE INCLUSIVE
After first reference, use first person plural pronouns when referring to the college such as we, our and us.
Example:
Instead of, “OTC offers associate degrees and certificates.”
Try, “We offer associate degrees and certificates.”
Speak directly to your audience by using first person plural pronouns including you and your.
Example:
Instead of, “In OTC’s Culinary Arts Program, students can pick one of two emphasis areas.”
Try, “In our Culinary Arts Program, you can pick one of two emphasis areas.”
BE HELPFUL
Make your writing helpful instead of pushy when communicating with students, employees, donors or the general public.
Example:
Instead of, “You must login to myOTC to register for classes.”
Try, “Trying to register for classes? Login to myOTC to get started.”
BE POSITIVE
Avoid negative words or phrases in your writing. Always opt for the positive alternative.
Example:
Instead of, “Don’t forget to apply for fall scholarships.”
Try, “Now’s the time to apply for fall scholarships.”
BE SIMPLE
In the world of academia, there are many institutionalized words that should be used, even if they are complex. Don’t dumb down the language. Instead, provide context to make it understandable.
Example:
Instead of, “Alpha Psi Tau received international recognition from Phi Theta Kappa.”
Try, “Phi Theta Kappa, the international honor society for two-year colleges, honored OTC’s chapter with several international awards.
SOCIAL MEDIA
Official OTC social media accounts may follow a more relaxed editorial style.